>incest prelude hint
A more succinct version could be
<Ask Izma to help "teach" your daughters.
>You'd like to give your daughter[s] more sexual experience and improve [her|their] skills%, and ask if% Izma would like to teach [her|them] with you.
I feel this could be more first-time friendly, as well as framing more as teaching than merely experiencing
<You think your daughter[s] would benefit from some hands-on sexual tutoring, and ask if Izma could help teach [her|them] with you.
>ask about it I'm glad
Period
>We tend to grow up fast
<We sharks
>Directs her gaze
One doesn't usually direct their own gaze, so either "Shifts her gaze" or "Directs your gaze" would be better
>shuffles her thighs and looks to her lap
<rubs her thighs together
>to the stream where your daughter[s] play
Using "are playing" confirms they're actually there at that moment
>are we gonna practice again
Missing a say:
>dropped the last line
I'm afraid it's been so long that I can't remember what the line originally was, but the concept you're getting at is called being a power bottom, and is absolutely possible when giving head, particularly with how sharp their teeth are. Maybe something like
<{she/one of them} proudly declares say: I'll make [you/him] [whatever word/phrase you wanna use for nutting] in no time[high cum:, and swallow it all this time]!
>tiny tenacious tyke
Comma. Also, still funny.
>take on her challenge | take that dare
Double use of take, and a bit clunky clunky besides; I'd drop the second sentence and reword the first as
<You take on her eager challenge, encouraging her to do her best.
>my alpha
Small contention, she probably oughta say "our alpha"
>she's at your back
<she's suddenly pressing her bare breasts into your back
>Izma gives an oral presentation before your daughter[s] [tries|try] to pass the oral exam.
I think there's a text limit for the hint box, or whatever it's called. Also a disabled version for too-big cocks. Could have a variation for using Izma's in that case? She might be too big as well though
<Have Izma give them an oral lecture
<You're too big for them to effictively practice on you
>yours and your [cock]
Might need the multicockdescription here, for those so endowed
>a clear sight of your cock
Crotch would be better, again for multicock
>While they eagerly settle near their mother, who has been patiently waiting for your permission, you tell her to start with her hands
Streamlining it to
<While they excitedly settle, you give their impatient mother permission to start with her hands
>in her eyes, anticipating your taste
<in her eyes as she anticipates your taste
>your hand, lightly squeezing.
Different cock types might have different pleasure points, but assuming it's generally the same as human, I'd add
<squeezing, giving special attention to the tip.
>letting her tongue hang out, already drooling.
<letting her drooling tongue hang out
>Rewarding her patience, you put your [cock] on her tongue, letting your pre-cum drop to her outstretched tongue.
<You reward her efforts by putting your pre-dripping [cock] on her outstretched tongue
>back and forth on her tongue
tongue's starting to get overused
<back and forth between her lips
>sloppy sound
sounds
>at the base of your [cock];[if
Semicolon should be inside the if statement
>as much of your cum as she can
<as much as she can
>Desperately, she tries to take
<She desparately tries to take
>her throat and nose black back with the excess cum
<the excuss cum blast back through her nose and throat
>you continue marking her with your seed, covering her face and tits
<you mark her face and tits with your seed, covering her front
>take no more you angle
Comma
>You keep on pumping her mouth with your spunk as she drinks it down blissfully.
<She blissfully drinks down your spunk as fast as you can pump it.
>she savors your taste, rolling it around in her mouth, which she opens to let you and her child
<she rolls it around in her mouth to savor your taste, before opening wide to let you and your child
>Reluctantly, your beta does give up your cock.
This just feels awkwardly tacked on imo
>wiping some drool off her face, and addressing
<wipes some drool off her face and addresses
>, especially if [he] goes into your throat; 
I'd use dashes here, and commas for the rest of the sentence instead of semicolons
>, or perhaps enhanced, 
Again, dashes
>hope you were paying attention because it's
<hope you kid[s] were paying attention, because now it's
>raised their hand
Unless we're gonna have male kids, should be her hand
>You feel their soft lips at the very tip of your cocks.
<Their soft lips feel heavenly on the tips of your cocks.
>first kiss for one of them
Kinda clunky, just end it at kiss
>with a pop, examining each child's
<with a pop to examine each child's
>Mom holds them there
Drop "there"
>long heavenly moment
Comma
>to hold her steady
<and hold her steady
>your cum flowing back up
Use surging instead of flowing; avoid double usage
>and your next cocksucker is still growing in her womb
This is kinda awkward, so I'd drop it and just use pregnant instead of fecund. Also needs a space at the start of the sentence
>The kids, however, make a valiant attempt to keep up with your output, but end up choking on your cocks as cum
<The kids, despite making a valiant attempt to keep up with your output, end up choking as cum
>cum squirting from your daughters'
<despite most of your cum ending up squirting from your daughters'
>Wanting to not make the same mistake in front of her parents again
Mistake?
<Not wanting anything to go to waste
>"But you promised!"
Not sure if this'd need a say here given the context, but might as well (happens again a few lines later later)
>she is grinding against her leg
<she is grinding against the other's leg
>licked off her, It's
Period
Gonna be some repeats of things listed prior for different variations, just going to copy-paste them for completeness
>You feel their soft lips at the very tip of your cocks.
<Their soft lips feel heavenly on the tips of your cocks.
>first kiss for one of them
Kinda clunky, just end it at kiss
>mother. She decides to help
<mother, and moves to help
>Mom holds them there
Drop "there"
>long heavenly moment
Comma
>With a pleasured moan of your own
<When you let out a pleasured moan
>reach full capacity. Your
<reach full capacity, and your
>lets go of the girls as they fall
Should be and instead of as
>Wanting to not make the same mistake in front of her parents again
Mistake?
>"But you promised!"
Not sure if this'd need a say here given the context, but might as well (happens again a few lines later later)
>she is grinding against her leg
<she is grinding against the other's leg
>children's hands'
I'm pretty sure hands doesn't need a '
>looks to Izma for a reaction. Izma says: 
<looks to Izma for a reaction, who tells her: 
>sight however. She begins
Personally, I'd tweak to
<sight, however; as evidenced by her
>Of course, if your sister wants
Swap "your sister" for she
>throat bulge
Based on this, player would have to be around 8 inches, although that's using adult dimenions
>fuck the hell out of her sister
Use "your daughter" on this one
>Her sister's face is a mess
Drop sister
>Her sister snickers
<The dominant girl snickers
>Your neglected daughter sits on her defeated sister's chest
At this point, said sister is still on her knees, so there needs to be a quick line earlier mentioning her falling over.
>You tell them to wash up. You are not done with them
<You tell them to wash up; they're not done
>Your daughter .... gets off her sister's chest
I'd frontload the detail about which daughter this is supposed to be, probably refer to her as the still-conscious one?
>seed again, a more gratifying
Semicolon
>Your stream of cum only barely ebbs as you provide for your child. She won't be hungry after this.
<Your stream barely even ebbs as you provide enough to ensure that she won't be going hungry.
>You see your daughter's watery eyes looking up at you with your [cock] occupying her throat. That sight is what you finish your orgasm with,
<The sight of your daughter's watery eyes looking up at you with your [cock] occupying her throat keeps you hard as you finish your orgasm,
>[fatherly] love. You help her
<[fatherly] love, and help her
>//lots of cum
This variant doesn't really lead into the merge all that well
>thick semen, intimately
Colon
>Your daughters practically slide in to either side of your [cock] while Izma works her hands around the tip, spreading your pre-cum.
<Your daughter rush to seat themselves on either side of your [cock] while Izma works your pre-cum around the tip.
>Before she can protest, Izma continues. [say:So while your sister is sucking [his] cock, you can help your sister]. She has no further complaints after that.
Overall a bit awkward, and she doesn't end up helping anyway.
<When the other starts to protest, your Beta sternly silences her. [say:You'll just have to learn to share].
>with her sister, on your cock
No comma
>cum in a minute
inside a minute
>You can see the pride on Izma's face
<Izma is glowing with pride
>With your [cock] occupied in her sister's mouth, she decides
<Though your [cock] may be occupied, your other daughter decides
>return the kiss
<return her affection
>With your kids' mouth occupied, Izma looks on
<Izma looks on in amusement
>noisy, wet sounds
Don't need noisy here as it was already established to be loud
>have made; Maybe you
maybe
>Suddenly, your daughter tenses
<She suddenly tenses
>you can see your [cock] bulging her throat
Shouldn't be possible to actually see anything while making out with the other daughter, but you could instead refer to feeling the tightness as the top of the throat giving way
>As the little girl .... receive the end of your bounty all over the both of them with her mouth wide open in a big smile.
<When the little girl .... receive the rest of your bounty all over their fronts and in their wide open mouths.
>daughter's mouth, to feed
No comma
>lost to the pleasure
<and you lose yourself to the pleasure
>tangle, all while her sisters voraciously work
I may have gotten a bit lost in variants, but I'm pretty sure it should be singular sister here
<tangle; while her sister voraciously works
>of the ways .... Maraeth
<of all the ways .... Mareth
>That wind in your lungs is
<That wind is
>You have to pull her off
I believe Izma was the one pushing her down in the first place
>little shark-pup
With shark being used later this sentence, just stick to pup
>Izma is clearly happy to spend quality time with her family
This variant kinda comes to a screeching halt imo; doesn't have Izma rubbing one out herself, or the snowballing. Should be able to just copy/paste those bits, to an extent.
>Izma is showering them with motherly affection, tussling their short hair, and beaming with a big smile
<Izma is beaming as she tussles their short hair; showering them with motherly affection
>if you don't give your other daughter a turn on your cock
Repetition
<if your other daughter doesn't get her share of your cock
>put a hand to her head
Wasn't the other girl pushing this one down? In which case she should be the one pulling her off, probably with a "had enough yet" type comment
>her eyes are watery with a dazed expression
I feel like this has been altered before, but I can't remember in what way. Regardless
<her eyes are watery and her expression dazed
>earning her turn
She didn't really do much to "earn" anything, honestly
>It's nice to relax once in a while
This whole sentence is basically just a repeat of the previous one
>player eye color
I appreciate what you're going for, but the player could've easily gotten a colour change, so it'd make more sense to just have them be Izma's colour
>deeper with a bit of resistance
<deeper with only a hint of resistance
>No longer able to hold back
I'm assuming these are for various cum amounts, but could do with being marked as such (unless they are & I'm just not seeing it)
>Unable to contain herself anymore
<Unable to contain anymore
Also worth pointing out that player was holding her down, so would need to let her go before she can fall back
>Now you are showering her
<--allowing you to shower her
>take some aim
<take aim
>your orgasm, vast and unending
Colon, not comma
>what a great [father]
<as a great [father] should
>then the young shark
<then gives the young shark
>calm down. Smearing
<calm down, smearing
>done scene before
I feel a quick goodbye kiss or thanks dad or something similar would be appropriate here
>Izma casts a longing gaze
at your crotch
>moves in behind mom
<crawls over to join the rest of the family
>a distinctly not very chaste kiss. Giving her a secondhand taste of you before giving her a brief hug and suggesting
<a distinctly not chaste hug and kiss--along with a secondhand taste of you--before suggesting
>Hormones are still running
<Hormones seem to still be running
>favorite alpha
Does she have multiple alphas?
>daughter's hesitation
Oughta be a less hesitant variant for done before
>as mother guides your child's hand in her own onto you
<as she guides the child's hands onto you
>Abrasive palms give her
<; slightly abrasive palms giving her small hand extra grip.
>your [balls] massaging them by proxy of the child's hand
Comma, and end the sentence at proxy
>propagative|life-giving
Life-giving. Also, I think mentioning her life would better make the point than any potential sisters, but that's just me
>explore it's fold
its
>soon bring her sibling into the world
Assuming it's a shark pregnancy; might be better to say "another child" or something
>experimenting
Works well enough; it's not really the focus of the scene so I wouldn't expect much. I know some scenes have a "sympathetic orgasm" for herms that you could try throwing in, but I don't think it's universal, doesn't really do anything, and I wouldn't lose sleep over its lack of inclusion here.
>into your girls mouth
girl's
>explore more of the shark-pup's mouth her tongue does the same with your cock. The beat
<eplore the shark-pup's mouth, her tongue does the same with your cock; the beat
>She experiences more of your flavor from the pre-cum coating her mouth; Those hands work to keep it flowing.
<Her hands work to keep your pre-cum coating her mouth, allowing her to experience your flavour to the fullest.
>Your not getting
You're
>Much like one teaches someone to ride a bike, after getting used to it with hands on Izma lets go to let the child continue on their own
<Izma allows the child to get used to the movement with assistance, before letting go and allowing her to continue on her own
>fingers to make .... moan in to your .... trembling to the added pleasure her .... look into those .... eye's shows her
Several back to back, just bundling them together
<fingers that make .... moan into your .... trembling from the added pleasure, her .... look in those .... eyes showing her
>a free hand to the back of her head
She just went hands-off, now she's back on? Also pushing should be to push
>her pointed ear
I thought the sharks just had nubs for ears
>get you in to her
into
>panicked little squeal
Should be a small repeat variation here where she's not as surprised
>your just barely
you're
>throat she can't articulate an answer but
Wrap in commas
>your family's demand for your semen any longer, your
<your family's demands any longer; your
>great urethra bulging waves that visibly bulge against
<great, urethra-bulging waves that wisibly swell your
>The entire process felt through your beta's
<Throughout the entire process, you feel your beta's
>with no small amount of lust and enthusiasm
wrap in dashes
>thick hot virile semen
Commas
>as much spunk
This whole variant could do with more synonyms, like jizz or just fluid
>more than enough to just stuff one child .... receive more
<plenty to stuff more than just one child .... receive the rest
>mother of your child's
<her mother's
>taken it's toll on your body, winded and with a dull ache in your groin, but immense satisfaction you
<taken its toll on your body. You feel winded and a dull ache in your groin, but immensely satisfied as you
>cleaning up your daughter's.
Your daughter's what?
>up right on her leg
<upright on her leg
>I did didn't I .... that good [daddy] .... your brow you .... collar bone causing her .... your seed she .... good [father] you have
Commas
>her little elfin ears flitting
Again, not sure that's the right ear type
>can be felt in both her throat and Izma's hand by your throbbing cock as your hot cum rushes through it
<can be clearly seen and felt through her throat as your hot cum rushes down your throbbing cock
>her throat alongside Izma's hand message
<her throat, alongside Izma's hand, massage
>those teary [eye color] eyes fixated
<as those teary [eye color] eyes fixate
>thoroughly satisfied you .... Alright thats enough
Commas, that's
>You pick her up with you
Sweet as the picture of throwing your daughter in the air is, it needs a strength/height check. Nothing too high, I think
>a hunger those
in
>okay ha .... drain you [dad] .... keep up these
Period, commas
>Hand in hand she guides
Drop hand in hand; repetitive
>cock#3] rests on your kid's head
Now, I've never done collaborative fellatio on a guy with three dicks, but I'm having trouble visualizing the logistics here; seems like quite the spread. I figure their heads'd need to be side by side, but this puts Izma's nearly a foot higher. A straight-on titjob seems a bit awkward as well, but she is pretty well-endowed
>slick soft flesh .... cock#2] she is .... the ride, her smaller
Commas, Semicolon instead of comma
>while her child chokes on your other cock while making efforts
<even as her child chokes through her efforts
>tight young squirming .... adorable cock .... their throats you
Commas
>pleasured, cock-muffled moans
Drop cock, repetition
>sharks' bellies
Replace sharks with something, repetition
>their mouths' .... their tongues'
No '
>and daughter. Your child
<and daughter, as your child
The lots of cum variant doesn't account for more than two cocks
>their throats. You tremble
<their throats as you tremble
>giving them every drop you can.
<giving them every drop.
Most of these variations seem to end without going into the aftercare scene
>how rough she was being
I know the board's opinion on the topic, but I feel a corrupt player really wouldn't care, especially as some variations had them contributing a bit
>I know [shes
she's
Overall, I think the aftercare scene works as it stands, at least from what I can remember about earlier variations. I would propose the creation a slightly altered version for child PCs; after all, such a character is hardly a mature adult