//Variation on anon's shark-daughter incest sex-ed intro
//Overly intrusive and heavy-handed rewrites, but this isn't meant to be proofreading, nor a good replacement, but a lazy example to illustrate what the fuck I mean



You'd like to give your daughter[s] some hands-on sexual education, to guide [her|them] further up the stairs of adulthood. But you're not [her|their] only parent here, so you bring it up with Izma.

//First time:
[say:U-Um... well.] Your tigershark beta quickly runs a shade of red at the prospect. [saystart]I... know [if (never lewded daughters) {some other races view it differently, so I wasn't sure you'd ask about it.[sayend] She dithers for a moment until finishing, [say:I'm glad you did, though.] That doesn't sound like she has anything against it.|you've already been teaching [her|them], so I've been wondering if...[sayend] She suddenly dithers, biting her lip. [say:Well, if I could help you out.]}] Then she's fine with doing this together? Izma unexpectedly steps up at your question to wrap you into a warm and very gentle hug. You can feel her breath on your ear when she whispers, [say:Of course... I'm sure [she|they] can learn plenty from you, my Alpha. About being an alpha [herself|themselves], and about serving one—which is I guess where I'll come in,] she adds with a chuckle. Despite her persisting bashfulness, you can sense her enthusiasm, " + (flags[kFLAGS.IZMA_NO_COCK] == 0 ? "if the growing erection brushing against you weren't indication enough, " : "") + "the smile peeking through her blush a rather suggestive one when she pulls away. You're good to go, then.

//Consecutive times:

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//Both:
Izma, having picked a large blanket from her belongings, accompanies you the short distance to where your daughter[s] are playing in the stream. She calls out for [her|them], and a swift pitter-patter of small wet steps announces the little shark['s|s'] approach as [she|they] scamper[s] over with [if (daughtercount = 1) {a giddy look on her face|giddy looks on their faces}].

//First time:
[say:Mom, [if (isfeminine) {Mommy|Dad}]!] [she|one of them] exclaims, and beaming at you asks, [say:Are you going to help [me|us] with reading?]

[say:Not this time, my dear,] Izma replies for you, tousling the girl's hair, [say:but we're going to be learning something else that's fun.] That seems to leave [her|them] as much puzzled as curious while Izma picks a nice spot to spread out her blanket, close to the water. Though she doesn't let you hang there for too long before she turns around, color rippling again across her features, and elaborates, [say:We're going to be teaching you all about... well, sex, and how to make your mate happy.] She very shortly isn't the only one flustered.

[say:S-Sex?] your daughter stammers[if (daughtercount = 1) {, staring awestruck at you both| as the [if (daughtercount = 2) {other stares wonderstruck at you both|rest break into skittishly murmuring among themselves}]}].

[say:Yes. We know you've been curious, so that's what we're going to have a go at, together with your [father].] You give a charming smile.

Despite the nervousness in the air, [she doesn't|they don't] seem reluctant—far from it. Between blooming cheeks and swishing tail[s], a palpable excitement twinkles through. Pride warming your chest—[she really does|they really do] take after [her|their] parents—you take that as your sign to help [if (isnaked) {Izma|each other}] undress and get comfortable, much to the added titillation of your young daughter[s], until you're sitting as naked as can be for [her|them] to see. [if (daughtercount = 1) {She's calmed down a good bit, fidgeting much less now that she eagerly watches|They've quieted down, and are now eagerly watching}] you two with eyes that [if (lewded daughters before) {seem to have an inkling of how this will go down|don't quite know yet what to expect}]. Your lover, a hand teasing over your thigh, poses the all-important question.

//Consecutive times:
[say:Mom, [if (isfeminine) {Mommy|Dad}]!] [she|one of them] exclaims, and with a tilt of her head asks, [say:Ah, are you gonna teach [me|us] more adult stuff?]

Izma replies in the positive, a hint of color reaching her cheeks as she tousles the young girl's hair. While she picks the usual spot to spread out her blanket, [if (daughtercount > 2) {murmurs and giggles of excitement ripple through your daughters. The one beside you fidgets uncertainly though|though, your daughter fidgets uncertainly beside you}], not in full control of her tail as [if (daughtercount = 2) {the other skitters to help her [if (isfeminine) {other }]mother|it kicks up small pebbles on the ground}]. You rest a hand on her, upon which she nuzzles up to you, the shyness fading from her cute lively eyes—or perhaps just being outshone by a fanned libido—when she says, [say:I'll make you feel really good this time, [Dad], better than [if (daughtercount = 1) {ever|[if (daughtercount = 2) {sis|the others}] can}], I promise.] [if (silly){Troubling though the tiny tenacious tyke's tremendous temerity that they tend to tote may be, it is nice to see your child not lacking in self-confidence|That is a bold claim, she must be quite confident}], so you challenge her to try her best. She definitely seems keen to take on that dare.

A pair of full, naked breasts pressing into your back interrupts your [father]–daughter pep talk, strong fingers [if (isnaked) {flirting over your chest|tugging at your [armor]}]. Izma grins at you. [say:Don't get started without me.] You let yourself be lead over to the place she prepared[if (!isnaked) { as your gear is being cast aside until you're as nude as your lover}] and sit down with her, the class[if (daughtercount < 3) {—well, if [if (daughtercount = 1) {a single student|two lone students}] can be called that—| }]assembled and eager before you.

//Both:
[say:So, my Alpha, what shall we teach [her|them] today?]




//More in-depth reasoning for some changes:
//Line 1, "improve their skills" sounded like you're treating them like a bunch of prostitutes-in-training, or concubines for your ever-growing harem, instead of your own damn children
//Line 3, no overly comical excitement. Neither from Izma (skipping), nor from the kids (jumping with their arms up like lobotomised monkeys). Both seem out of character
//The blanket can have the purpose of making things more comfortable, "professional", as well as being something by which your daughters recognise it's sex-ed time instead of playing or reading or whatever. Otherwise I'll have to assume they're psychics
//"flummoxed"—too strong of a word to fit here, and an addition of curiosity makes sense to me
//"Izma simply nods"—she's rarely so taciturn, at least have her say something. Don't even have to make it proper dialogue
//"Are we going to practice sex again?"—kinda stiff, stilted, what kind of kid says that? Especially without build-up or preamble
//"I'm going to have you cum in under a minute this time. Just you wait, [dad]."—????¿¿?
//Study existing scenes for speech and behavioural clues. This kind of in-your-face and utterly unabashed boldness is quite out of character
//I first thought you forgot to mention any undressing in the consecutive variation, but the nested conditionals were just hard to parse. Makes things much clearer to a reader if you indicate the really long ones with comments instead, as shown above