////Recruiting [Alice Name] the alice. I'm not going to name her for now. Names under consideration: Kim, Shassa, Sitri, Vassa, Eli/Abi. I am currently leaning toward Sitri, but still open to feedback. I will probably only do 3 more drafts of this at most. Anyone who feels like adopting this project is free to do so. You can even choose her name. ////Encountering [Alice Name] scene. Has a chance of occurring while exploring the glacial rift. As you trek through the rift, a strange sense of calmness washes over you. A movement from behind alerts you to the presence of someone else, and you turn to see a young girl wearing a wool winter coat, white as snow, it ends just past her knees. She looks up at you, shivering with a pitiful expression on her fair face. [say:I am very cold [sir]. Would you be kind enough to help me escape this chill?] Knowing this familiar sensation is what preceded the Alice preying on you. You might wish to call her out as what she is, or avoid her altogether; although, if you're wrong, you may be the only hope she has out here. ////prompt player ////[Leave] Same as generic alice. ////[Confront] Go to Confronting [Alice Name] scene. ////[Trust](There must be someway you can help this child find warmth...) Go to Trust [Alice Name] scene. ////Trust [Alice Name] scene. I might do it later, but if someone else wants to do this I'll gladly incorporate it. ////Confronting [Alice Name] scene You take a breath to clear your mind while the influence of her aura is still just starting. You will have none of her shenanigans, and tell her such. The girl acts confused, maintaining her illusion the best she can. Keeping a firm and stern look, you won’t give in to her. The alice crosses her arms and ponders for a moment. [say:Fine.] she says as she sheds the illusion hiding her demonic traits. You eye her as she walks around, tail flicking side to side below her coat as she goes. [say:Since you have not run off or attacked me, I am guessing you had something else on your mind?] She asks with a hopeful yet sultry tone. ////prompt player ////[Sex](You do have something on your mind.) Go to [Alice Name] Sex menu ////[Talk](Learn more about the alice first.) Go to [Alice Name] Talk scene ////[Fight](Kick her ass) enters combat with [Alice Name]. [Alice Name] is a particularly cautious alice, and attempts to flee at 75% health. ////[Leave]Return to camp. ////[Alice Name] Talk scene You explain that you just wanted to talk for a few minutes. [say:It is less than I hoped for, but given the rarity of anything sentient and sane enough to hold a conversation, I will gladly chat for a while.] Introducing yourself, you offer a brief explanation on why you're here, before asking the same of her. [say:Pleasure to meet, [name]. I am [Alice Name],] she says. [say:I admit there are more comfortable environments, but the snow serves for easy concealment, and few... other demons trek this far.] Reasonable points, you'd suppose, although you still express skepticism. It's doubtful she's even four feet tall--wild grass would hide this girl. As for feeding, this may be one of the worst places of all. [say:I make do,] [Alice] remarks, approaching as she speaks. [say:My abilities are perfectly sufficient, but if I may be short with you...] She gazes [if (height>48) {up[if (height>55 and silly) { your considerably taller stature. [say:No pun intended...]| into your [eyes]}]|into your [eyes]}]. [say:We're in the middle of a glacier. We should find a place to warm up before we exchange life stories.] It appears she's building up a heat within you already, and you instinctively take a defensive posture. The little demon backs up immediately. [say:Merely my nature; I didn't mean to impose.] Her magic subsides. Instead of standing out here in the cold, you both retreat to a nearby recess in the ice, granting shelter from the harsh winds. Looks like you have some options. You could let her feed on you to sustain her for who knows how long, leave the demon to whatever fate has in store for her, or ask her some more questions. ////Go to [Alice Name] Menu ////[Alice Name] Menu ////[Talk](Ask [Alice Name] some questions.) go to [Alice Name] Talk Menu ////[sex](Feed her.) Go to [Alice Name] sex menu ////[Leave](Sucks to be her.) Return to camp. ////[Alice Name] sex menu ////Outside the scope of what I intended to write. Someone else will need to implement this in some way. ////[Alice Name] Talk menu ////[Back]Return to [Alice Name] Menu ////[Camp?](Offer the downtrodden demon somewhere to go.)Go to [Alice Name] Recruitment scene ////[Becoming an alice](ask her what she did to wind up here.) Go to [Alice Name] History scene ////[Alice Name] History scene [say:"It was my job to appraise and catalog my master's collection, and I was unfortunate enough to take the blame of one item being the claim of a higher lord than my own...] A grimace covers her face. [say:His severity to cover his personal failings assures you that I, at least, am no more fond of the conquerors of this world than you would be.] She didn't go much into the details of the incident, but perhaps she will be willing to share more about it in another place and time. ////[next]Go to [Alice Name] Talk menu ////[Alice Name] Recruitment scene Given the restraint she has shown so far, you think you might be able to provide for her and keep her under control. You offer her a place in your camp and tell her it would be safer there than here. [say:Forgive my pessimism but... I [b:am] a succubus, despite my lack of carnal appeal. I wouldn't want to incur your wrath with my needs.] [if (Vapula in camp){You are aware, and she wouldn't even be the first succubus you took in. [say:Wait, you have a succubus living with you?] You recount your encounters with Vapula, and how you were able to eventually subjugate her. With a expression of disbelief she says: [say:A single [race] took on a horde of demons, [b:and] tamed their master?] [if (Ceraph is slave){Confirming that you have, and that she wasn't even the only master of a harem you acquired. Summarizing your encounters with Ceraph, you tell her that you would like to make her the newest addition. [if (silly){[say:Marae's tits! Are you trying to start your own demon harem or something?] Yes. [say:Fair enough. Alright, I'll join your harem if you promise to feed me. However, I'd like to ask your other sluts if you're a good master first.] She really isn't in any position to be bargaining here, but there is no chance of them offering anything other than your praise. Since it will only help, you agree to her only two conditions|[say:Point made, you can handle succubi. I did not think it possible to sate two demons without becoming one yourself.] You inform her there are ways to mitigate, or even reduce, corruption. [say:If you are confident you can keep me fed, I see only one reason I might decline.] You inquire as to what her concern is. [say:I want to ask your other sluts if you are a good master. I'd rather not risk being mutilated, chained up in a basement, or worse. However, if they are happy with your treatment, I will be delighted to join.] Given the offer, she really isn't in a position to make demands. Her request, however, was reasonable, and there is no chance your pets would do anything other than sing your praises. Since it can only improve her opinion of you, you agree to her only two conditions.}][say:Great, now let's get the fuck out of here. It's colder than the bitch-queen's heart.] By now, you're starting to feel the chill in your bones as well. You make your way back to camp with your newest, and smallest demon harem member. ////[Next] Go to [Alice Name] Arrival scene.|You confirm that you did indeed do that. [say:Oh... I am glad we did not fight.] You explain that force is unnecessary when she is being cooperative. If Vapula had just submitted, you wouldn't have had to fight her, or her harem. [say:I get it. I'll submit and join you if you can promise me just two things.] You point out that she is already getting a lot out of the offer, compared to subsisting out here. What more could she want? [say:To be kept fed, and to not be maimed or killed. Sorry, but I have heard terrifying tales of captive succubi.] The fact that she felt that had to even be stated shows more caution than some other demons you've met. Would you have wanted to bring her in if you didn't intend on feeding her? And with such a bare minimum second condition, you agree not to kill or maim your newest addition. [say:Great, now let's get the fuck out of here. It's colder than the bitch-queen's heart.] By now, you're starting to feel the chill in your bones as well. You make your way back to camp with her. ////[Next] Go to [Alice Name] Arrival scene.}]|You understand that she is a succubus, telling her you intend on keeping her safe and fed as long as she follows your rules. [say:Alright. What are the rules? No panties? Do I need to dress up in a maid's outfit? Maybe a buttplug?] Clarifying that you had only basic rules for the moment: that she not feed on you--or anyone--without your permission, that she suppress her magical inclinations, and that she abide your word going forward. [say:Hold on, I will not be jumping into a volcano or anything.] You assure her you won't be asking for anything that will seriously hurt her. [if (silly){i:You could probably toss her in yourself if that was what you wanted. }][say:Alright, I accept your conditions, so long as you keep your promise.] With that, it looks like you have a new addition to your camp. You begin making your way back with [Alice Name]}] ////[Next] Go to [Alice Name] Arrival scene. ////[Alice Name] Arrival scene.  As you are traveling with [Alice Name] she asks if the others at your camp will be fine with her joining. Thinking about it, some might not be ok with you bringing back an Alice. Before you can reply, she says: [say:If you want, I can use illusions to hide my demonic traits.] Well, that might be convenient to explain to others who you brought back if you are willing to lie about it. Do you want her to maintain the illusion of being an innocent little girl around others in your camp? ////prompt player ////[Yes](Pretending you are taking in a lost child might make explanations easier.) Set [Alice Name]disguise=True ////[No](She should just be herself; you will handle whatever fallout that might cause.) Set [Alice Name]disguise=False ////I am abandoning the arrival scene from this point on. If someone else wants to take up this project they have my blessing to do so, but this is as far as I go with this. I will continue to make implement peoples feedback in my work before this point. I never had any intention on fully implementing this character, just to inspire others to add on to it. ////Firstly Jojo being able to sense corruption will make him alarmed and assume the player is unaware of the danger the girl poses if she is disguised. He will beg you to keep her away so that her corruption does not spread. There is a possibility the player might be able to lie, and say the corruption she has is only proof that she needs help, and she would certainly lose her soul without it. This would force a tough decision for Jojo, where he must choose between protecting others from corruption or trying to potentially save a child. I am unsure how accurately Jojo can sense corruption, but there is a possibility that he can tell the difference between someone with extreme corruption and a full demon. In that case, no matter what the player says, he is sure the child must be a demon in disguise. Nobody cares about tainted Jojo. If she is not disguised, he will demand they leave, or he will. similar to Holli. ////Second, there's Amily, the other (possibly) pure rat. I don't think she has any Wuxia corruption-sensing powers, but she can tell a pure player from a corrupt one. For pure Amily I imagine she would pretend it is normal, than confront the player that the child is dangerous, and she doesn't want her corruption spreading here. I imagine whatever corruption sense Amily has is weaker than Jojo's attunement, so I doubt she can tell between extreme corruption and a full demon. Similar to Jojo, you could probably tug at her heartstrings to get her to agree to not contest it even if she doesn't condone it. If no disguise she leaves same as with Holli. I don't think she does this with Vapula, but that is probably because Vapula's camp integration is half-baked. Slave Amily, will just welcome the newest slut in your harem, not daring to upset you. ////Kiha... As far as I know, she has no corruption-sense. Even with zero corruption, she assumed you were with the demons when you first met. I also don't think she is the sharpest tool in the shed. She's most likely hook, line, and sinker for you to bring in a lost child to adopt. If there is no disguise, she freaks out before threatening to kill the demon herself. It is difficult to get through to Kiha, so this might be a challenge, but I think there is an angle you can approach this from where you point out they are both products of Lethice's cruelty, and both of them want her dead. The difference being Kiha is strong enough to fend for herself, something the demons took away from [Alice Name]. If that doesn't work she abandons the camp. You know her stance on demons, but you believe this one is no longer capable of causing anyone problems, and you trust them to behave. Whether Kiha buys into this angle at all is up in the air. Let me know what you guys think. There are some pretty logical points, I think, and also some appeals to her own feelings and history. At best, I think Kiha agrees to let her stay here but promises to kill her and anyone else she turns into a demon should it happen. ////Arian. I believe they also have corruption-sensing abilities, but to what extent I am unsure. Either way, being a master mage, I doubt Arian would fall for the illusion. Arian is very smart and would probably figure it out, so I don't think the disguise changes the outcome here other than some extra sleuthing dialog. I think Arian would be concerned for you and would not want anything to happen to the player. They would probably urge the player not to allow her to stay. I also believe Arian would cave in and trust the players' judgment if they are adamant about keeping [Alice Name]. Other possibility, he just never notices her in the camp. ////Rathazul. We already have precedent, in that he states his concerns before letting the player do what they want. The question is whether he falls for the disguised form or not. Let me know what you think. ////Helia. I think she falls for the disguise. If [Alice Name] isn't disguised, she probably freaks out and confronts the player. Possibly bringing up how she stopped fucking minotaurs because you were concerned about her, then you go and take in demons, risking your soul. She accuses the player of being a hypocrite, as if she wasn't concerned about your well-being like you were. I think you can calm her down somehow, but it will probably take some work. ////Marble. ////Phylla. Does she even come out of her birthing pit? ////Izma. She expresses some concern for you before remembering her place as your beta. ////Everyone else. At worst, indifference. Alright, let me know what you disagree with, or why my opinion is trash. ////Vapula. I'm not sure, but she certainly won't defy you. She could see the new succubi as competition, and be reluctant to welcoming her. She could also just see her as yet another addition to your growing harem, might be a sisterly angle here somewhere.